Position Statement

Question : Should US government restrict the time to play violent game by adding programming code in game?


Eventhough games can affect to behavior of people potentially, US goverment should not restrict people's right to play game. The formation of United State is because of pursuing the freedom of religion which is involved with people's right. US government cannot control individuals. The most important reason is due to the fact that individual's right have to be guaranteed.

"Freedom of religion" has nothing to do with restricting violent video games, but you do need to look at legal and cultural/social information, as well as economic and computer programming lines of evidence.

EXPLORING THE GENRE P4 : Group 4

YoungSol, YooJin, JoonHahm

*WHAT KIND OF VOCABULARY IS EMPLOYED?
- mostly in general vocab based on professional information(citation),
Use the professional/technical synonym for something whenever such a word exists. Depending on the audience, you may or may not need to offer a definition.

*WHO WOULD BE THE MOST INTERESTED IN READING AN ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY?
-who works or study in that field
-who has a similar question as a writer
-People who has an opposite opinion

*WHAT WILL THE READER DO (not think or learn, but DO!) WITH IT AFTER READING?
-compare the position with a writer
-may think about other new questions from the paper
It varies, according to the situation. For example, someone cooking for a family who reads an essay arguing that a certain ingredient is dangerous might change his recipe.

*How many sources are used?
- about 5 to 10

*What's in the final paragraph?
-summaraize evidences for my opinion and restate my opinion
You need these things, but go beyond them. Briefly, what are the implications of your position being true? What actions should readers take, based on this position?

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